Wednesday 11 July 2012

A Familiar Criminal


"Weewa... Weewa..." Voices everywhere in the city.

It was a sunny Monday of July. I was enjoying my time watching TV in my house, when a police man called me and other forensic scientists. There was a crime in the 'Queen's Bank' in the center of the city. We had to go there.

We our special equipments and we went to the bank as fast as we could. What caught our attentions at first, was the two men wearing navy blue suits laid on the floor with blood coming out of their bodies. The two men work in the bank.

We looked for evidence. We found a heavy black gun on the floor beside the two dead men, we also found a dark brown hair on a desk. The was a 100$ bill on the floor. We thought that it may had fallen from the thief while stealing money. And we found a chewed pink gum the floor, near the two men.

There were many cameras in the bank; three of them were covered with pieces of clothes. But the other hidden two were not covered.

We took all the evidence and the notes we wrote to the crime lab, where we studied the evidence to know the real criminal, while many police men were surrounding the bank.

First, we saw the videos on the cameras on a big screen. The thief was wearing all black with white gloves; he killed the two men and went looking for the money.

"That's why we didn't find any fingerprints, the thief was wearing gloves," a scientist said.

We saw the videos many times. We wanted to see the small details. We found that something fell from the thief's mouth while killing the men, and that the 100 $ bill fell from him while stealing the money. He was going to get it back, but he didn't when he noticed that police men were in the bank.

Many police men looked for suspects all over the city.

After a few hours, we had a suspect. His air was similar to the hair we found in color, but it was thicker. We gave him a gum to chew, his teeth shape were different than the chewed gum we got from the bank. That man was not surely the criminal, but he was still a suspect.

The police men kept looking for suspects, it took them a long time, but they finally found one. The directly got him to the crime lab.

When I first saw the second suspect, I was sure that I know this guy. His face was familiar to me, but I couldn't remember his name, or where I have seen him.

The hair had the same color and the thickness, like the hair we had. The shape of his teeth was the same too.

I was trying to figure out who is hem and where have I seen him. After a while, I realized that he was that smart student in my class in grade twelve.

He went to the bank and found the two men. He killed them so that they don't be witness and tell is what they saw. He wore gloves to hide his fingerprints.

It was really strange to have him as the thief; he was the smartest in our class. People can really change everything about them, either in a positive way, or in a negative way, like this man.

That man went to jail; he deserves that, because as the police men said, "This was the biggest crime in the city since 1645". It was really a hard crime, but we finally found the criminal

2 comments:

  1. RANA CHAABAN20:39

    I liked the idea and i think you should elaborate it to be a story...work more on looking for DNA evidence....it can be a nice story full of action and suspense :)

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  2. Thank you Miss Rana, Inshallah I will make a story... I will keep looking for DNA!! :)

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